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Chilbi Rarity Drawing

KittyJewelpet78

Published: Mar 30, 2014

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My Drawing of Chilbi Rarity.

MLP (c) Hasbro
FiM (c) Lauren Faust

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HairyPawter

May 4, 2014

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_{Hi! So, you need to work on some things, but practice makes perfect ^u^

Im not a fan of mlp, but i have drawn them for requests, ect. , so i know some mlp anatomy

Okay, let's get started

The top hair is pretty good, but from an image online the"top" part of Rarity's mane needs to be taller, and the side part needs to be a bit shorter. The horn is to rounded though. The head is a bit too big, but i know that's in the "chibi" style. The ear is okay, but needs to be a bit curvy on the sides. The eyes are small,and Rarity doesn't have bottom eyelashes like some of the others, but it's really how you wanna draw em. The muzzle is too pointy and needs to be rounded at the "tip" of it. Now, the neck area, i know it's a chibi style, but she needs a neck. I remember drawing no neck, then someone told me, and my art got better. Another neck area tip, it's a bit too fat. The chest shouldn't be that low too. The front legs are good, but just one tip if your not drawing chibi, make the very start of the leg (by the chest) and bit smaller, then just make the leg a bit bigger as you go down to draw. The back leg needs a lot of improvement though. It needs that U sort of shape, like you see on animals before the actual leg part and that back leg needs to be less fat. You should also put the other back leg "behind" the front back leg. The tail is pretty good! Though one tip for the hair and tail again, if you have dark colors for the hair\mane things you should outline the pencil line with a black pen or a fine point art pen/sharpie (im guilty of not doing this a lot too XD) I drew a little "redo" with some of my tips, i know it has a lot of mistakes too! (Here's the drawing sta.sh/043dmmv5if3) I hope this helped, and im sorry if it sounds harsh! If ya ever need tips, just stop by my page or note me! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>}