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Princess Celestia Pony Drawing

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Just my Drawing of Princess Celestia.

MLP (c) Hasbro
FiM (c) Lauren Faust
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© 2014 - 2024 KittyJewelpet78
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is a nice picture
It's obvious that you were trying while drawing this

Positive:
I knew exactly who this was: Princess Celestia. If this was your first attempt at drawing her, it is a very nice try! You did her shoes and necklace very well and her mane is nicely attempted! The more visible wing is also very well done, better than my attempt. My favorite elements are the head mane, which is done evenly and looks great; the accessories (shoes, crown, and necklace), which also look great; and the eye closest to the viewer, which is very nicely done. Well done!

Negative:
The lines are rather shaky, but it's understandable. Her right front hoof lacks a shoe and her left front leg is bent rather awkwardly. The far eye is much too large for the face, and throws the view off from your success in the other eye. The snout should be a little further up and the side behind it should be less visible. The horn grows as it goes out anf then suddenly comes to a point instead of going from wide to point.

Reasons for Judgement
Vision: It is a work in progress, but not bad at all

Originality: There is quite a bit of Princess Celestia fanart, and this one doesn't stand out much from the rest

Technique: You show a promise for traditional work, but you still need some practice

Impact: This shows me you have promise and will get better, as this is pretty good!

I hope this critique is helpful ^^